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djdillyc
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Post by djdillyc » Sat Dec 05, 2020 6:12 pm

Hello,

I am writing a short 20 measure waltz and wanted to get anyone's feedback.
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Post by Peter Thomsen » Sat Dec 05, 2020 8:07 pm

No comments on the music; I suppose that what you have written, is what you want.

Comments on the layout:

1) Your barlines are quite thin.
I would make them thicker.
(Document Options - Barlines)

2) In meas. 6 - 7 I would begin the slur on the first tied note:
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Post by djdillyc » Sat Dec 05, 2020 9:34 pm

Thanks! I change that right away! :D

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